Monday, June 05, 2006

that feeling

note to people: much of what I do is creative writing, so the shit written may not be happening... the craft of a writer to conjur up emotion... keep that in mind children

that feeling
of raw skin
exposed
everything hurting
throbbing
bleeding
pain
right at the center
screaming silently
pulling you in
to the boiling
moaning
pit of your stomach
silence
spurs more pain
as you see the david enter
in your soundless reverie
and another gnat lands
on your bleeding flesh

2 comments:

Carly said...

"gnat lands
on your bleeding flesh"

Wow.

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